I’ve enjoyed exploring Japanese poetry so much in recent times. I’d like that thank all of you for your comments on my last poem Above the Ocean Breeze. I received an overwhelming number of messages both online and offline. I’d also like to thank Nortina again for working with me on that piece.
Still in the spirit of Japanese poetry, I’ve managed to make all five stanzas of today’s poem a tanka. I’m even considering starting a ‘Tanka series’ alongside my ‘Haiku series’ (read the first of my Haiku series here.
Anyway, enjoy today’s post….inspired by this Daily Prompt.
Longing for good days
One where the sun brings me warmth
And my days stress free
That my heart bursts out with love
So I can have inner peace
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What is inner peace
Is it when the winds are still?
Or when time has stopped?
Perhaps it’s when sea is calm
And worries just disappear
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That tranquility
That place only I exist
Buried in my thoughts
Planning , plotting and scheming
Dreaming of domination
…..
I want better days
Where your hope rubs off on mine
Together we stand
Making our problems smaller
Until the world is better
…..
One void of chaos
Yes, we can all be happy!
So forget your pain
Let the wind blow them away
Let the wind blow them away….
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Hello! A lovely poem with a great take on Japanese poetry. Have a wonderful day. 🙂
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Thank you Lauren. Have a lovely day too 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you for reading Marianne 🙂
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