Haiku #3

 I’m enjoying my Haiku series a bit too much lol. I would really love for you guys to try and reply my Haiku – use the comment box below.

You can make it a bit more fun by starting yours with the last line of mine 🙂

Looking forward to reading!

When the rain drops stop

Can you tell me what happens?

A rainbow or clouds…


19 Comments Add yours

  1. nvsubbaraman says:

    A rain bow or cloud
    One can not predict nature
    Both make me quite proud!

    R U happy Ameena?
    N V Subbaraman

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  2. Amanda says:

    I would love to be able to post but am painfully bad at poetry…of any kind. Lol

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Amina says:

      Haha doesn’t have to be poetry Amanda. Could be a story…or a rant even 😂

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Hiya!
    Lovely Haiku poem Ameena! I hope you are having a wonderful Easter. 🙂
    I would love to try and write a Haiku but I am not sure how to begin…
    I have really been enjoying these mini posts, they are meaningful and sound like a lot of fun to write.
    Have a fantastic day whatever you get up to.
    Speak to you soon.
    Lauren x

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    1. Amina says:

      Hi Lauren, been a while. I hope you’re good…

      I’ll email you some instructions on how to write a haiku, they’re pretty easy to write.

      I’m glad you’re enjoying the Haiku series. I hope you had a great easter. x


      1. Thank you! That would be wonderful. You too. 🙂


  4. LOL I am trying to try but i may fail.

    Cloud White Cloud Dark
    Cloud Full Cloud Empty
    Whatever you Choose Dear Cloud
    Choose Greatness

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    1. nvsubbaraman says:

      Greatness is greatness
      Full or empty, white or dark
      Cloud has all kindness!!

      (5-7-5 syllables -Lines 1st and third rhyming)
      Please read ENVIUS THOUGHTS in https://nvsr.wordpress.com for my many many Haiku poems from the archives.)

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    2. Amina says:

      Haha almost there. Good try. But the rule of a Haiku is you have to follow a 5-7-5 pattern for your stanzas 🙂

      You could totally write poetry though. Love this reply x


      1. nvsubbaraman says:

        Yes; that is what I have followed meticulously in my comment!


      2. nvsubbaraman says:

        That is right.


      3. Amina says:

        Oh sorry I was trying to reply ‘Foodie in Lagos’ not you 😂


      4. nvsubbaraman says:

        Thanks Ameena.


      5. Hahah I used to write poetry when i was still a lover girl. Had a notepad but I’m sure I can find it somehow.. I’d just be laughing at my younger self. But hey this 5 – 7 – 5 pattern, I totally had no idea mehn… xoxo

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      6. Amina says:

        haha yes o a lot of Japanese poetry have rules you have to follow.. haiku 5-7-5, tanka 5-7-5-7-7…

        i would love to read some of your lover girl poems haha


      7. nvsubbaraman says:

        It is a great genre of Japanese Poetry. Kindly read my ENVIUS THOUGHTS in https://nvsr.wordpress.com exhaustively on HAIKU poems from the ARCHIVES. All the best !

        Liked by 1 person

  5. kiwinana says:

    Maybe this Haiku is a bit late, but I couldn’t help but have a go at it.
    A rainbow or clouds, Refreshes a summer day, Making it cooler.

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