I’m enjoying my Haiku series a bit too much lol. I would really love for you guys to try and reply my Haiku – use the comment box below.
You can make it a bit more fun by starting yours with the last line of mine 🙂
Looking forward to reading!
When the rain drops stop
Can you tell me what happens?
A rainbow or clouds…
ameena's musings 
A rain bow or cloud
One can not predict nature
Both make me quite proud!
R U happy Ameena?
N V Subbaraman
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I would love to be able to post but am painfully bad at poetry…of any kind. Lol
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Haha doesn’t have to be poetry Amanda. Could be a story…or a rant even 😂
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Hiya!
Lovely Haiku poem Ameena! I hope you are having a wonderful Easter. 🙂
I would love to try and write a Haiku but I am not sure how to begin…
I have really been enjoying these mini posts, they are meaningful and sound like a lot of fun to write.
Have a fantastic day whatever you get up to.
Speak to you soon.
Lauren x
http://www.laurelella.blogspot.com
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Hi Lauren, been a while. I hope you’re good…
I’ll email you some instructions on how to write a haiku, they’re pretty easy to write.
I’m glad you’re enjoying the Haiku series. I hope you had a great easter. x
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Thank you! That would be wonderful. You too. 🙂
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LOL I am trying to try but i may fail.
Cloud White Cloud Dark
Cloud Full Cloud Empty
Whatever you Choose Dear Cloud
Choose Greatness
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Greatness is greatness
Full or empty, white or dark
Cloud has all kindness!!
(5-7-5 syllables -Lines 1st and third rhyming)
Please read ENVIUS THOUGHTS in https://nvsr.wordpress.com for my many many Haiku poems from the archives.)
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Haha almost there. Good try. But the rule of a Haiku is you have to follow a 5-7-5 pattern for your stanzas 🙂
You could totally write poetry though. Love this reply x
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Yes; that is what I have followed meticulously in my comment!
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That is right.
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Oh sorry I was trying to reply ‘Foodie in Lagos’ not you 😂
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Thanks Ameena.
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Hahah I used to write poetry when i was still a lover girl. Had a notepad but I’m sure I can find it somehow.. I’d just be laughing at my younger self. But hey this 5 – 7 – 5 pattern, I totally had no idea mehn… xoxo
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haha yes o a lot of Japanese poetry have rules you have to follow.. haiku 5-7-5, tanka 5-7-5-7-7…
i would love to read some of your lover girl poems haha
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It is a great genre of Japanese Poetry. Kindly read my ENVIUS THOUGHTS in https://nvsr.wordpress.com exhaustively on HAIKU poems from the ARCHIVES. All the best !
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Maybe this Haiku is a bit late, but I couldn’t help but have a go at it.
A rainbow or clouds, Refreshes a summer day, Making it cooler.
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